Friday, October 27, 2017

Week 5 Story: The Fable of the Animals

Long ago, when the world was created, the water was filled with creatures, then the land. Lastly, Man was created. At this time, every animal was created equal. They needed a system to decide who was the most and least powerful and everything else in between. Man was chosen to be the one to assign the levels of power to all of the animals.

Man told all the creatures to gather round to hear the news. He told them that the next day, they would be competing in an obstacle course for the different power ranks. The course would test strength, agility, and endurance. He would create the course the previous night, and it would be a surprise for each competitor so that no one would have an advantage.

Coyote has been know as being sly and cunning even since the beginning of creation. That night, while all of the other animals were resting, he chose to stay up all night spying on Man so that he could see the obstacle course. He was determined to get the most power, and he knew that would be possible if he had the advantage of seeing the course. Otherwise, he knew he would lose to stronger animals like Cougar and Bear.

As he waited and spied he took mental notes over the course. This is taking longer than I expected, I'm ready to rest, he thought. But, he continued spying. When the sun began to rise all of the other animals started to wake up and prepare for the course. Coyote had stayed awake the whole night. The course would start in about an hour, so he decided to take a small nap. He asked Man, "Can you wake me before we begin the course?" Shorty after, he fell asleep.

Little did Coyote know, Man saw him spying that night. He was disappointed in Coyote for cheating. Instead of waking him, he called for the race to start immediately. And so the race began without Coyote. Cougar and Bear received the most power. Frog received the least amount of power, but even below him was Coyote. For cheating, Coyote was rewarded the smallest amount of power. All of the animals laughed at and ridiculed him, but Man felt a bit sorry for him.

Even though Coyote was quite powerless, Man decided to reward him with even more cunning abilities. He was created to be cunning, but after this event he was six times more cunning than before.

Coyote
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Story Source: The Fable of the Animals from Myths and Legends of California and the Old Southwest by Katharine Berry Judson

Author's Note:
In the original story, power is to be assigned by man. Rather than the animals competing, man simply assigns power by giving different bows of different lengths to the animals. The longest bows have the most power and the shortest bows have the least power. Coyote decides to stay up to be the first one to meet Man in the morning, so that Man will give him the longest bow. When he stays up all night, he gets too tired by the morning and falls asleep. After man has given out all the bows, he realized he's missing one creature. He finds out that it's Coyote, so Coyote is left with the shortest bow. Man feels bad for him, and decides to still reward him with more cunning. I changed a few plot details in my story. First, I changed how the animals receive power because I felt that they should compete for it. Next, I changed that Man knew Coyote was cheating, so he paid the consequences.

4 comments:

  1. Great Story McKenna!

    I liked the image of the coyote that you used. It is almost like the coyote is smiling because he is tricky! I haven't read the original story before so it was interesting to read yours and then see what the Author's note had to say. I also think you did a good job of separating your paragraphs! Keep up the good work!

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  2. Hi McKenna!
    I read the original story last week, and I really like the changes you made to it! I think having a competition to assign power is more understandable to most people now, so that was a great change. I also like that the man caught coyote and punished him rather than the coyote just oversleeping by accident. Also, your writing is very clear and flows nicely!

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  3. Hi McKenna!
    I have never read the original story, but I thoroughly enjoyed yours. I like how you changed the plot up to have the animals compete for their power, as I feel that that is also the right way to achieve it. I also like how you included a subliminal message about how our actions always have consequences by showing that Coyote is caught cheating. Your sentences make sense, and your story was full of vivid details. Great job!

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  4. Hey again, McKenna!

    I think that this story is really great! I am not familiar with the source story, so it was nice to read something completely new. I think that this story can offer a valuable lesson though. It does emphasize that sometimes trying to gain an advantage over others unfairly can be detrimental. I also like how man rewarded coyote with cunning ability. Man showed some compassion in doing so.

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