The story had an interesting plot and I would keep that the same. A new writing style I want to try is the OU style. Changing the setting to a location on campus. If this were the case, I would fast forward to next year. President Boren is retiring, and the new president is highly disliked because he is rude, mean and inconsiderate. This character would replace the king. I would also change the ending because I think cutting off a president's head is a little too violent. A beautiful new assistant to the president would become close to him, and later she would learn the awful truth behind him. She learns enough to get him fired and she later saves the university.
My version would be a new and modern version. I would simply use a similar plot, but change a few key details and characters.
Bibliography: The Pretty Stranger Who Killed the King from Folk Stories From Southern Nigeria by Elphinstone Dayrell.
The Witch
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